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Ailam Remard

  • Lyric Poetry Re: It's Time.

    Lol. When I saw the title "It's time" I thought it was about someone going into labour. Sorry but OMG I feel really stupid. I liked it though. :D.

    Apr 24, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: For all the Heathers...

    Is this real or not because it is posted under "Other". ?? If it is I'm sorry.

    Apr 24, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: First Kiss

    Cute! I LOVED it. I have to admit I did think "What the F?" when he started to lick the girls face. Lol. I liked how it was a dream. ...

    Apr 23, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 2

    Reading this is sort of depressing Jared!

    Apr 23, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 1

    Bradford really made you guys do that in health class? That's retarded! That's why Bailey is cool. Peace! -Ailam

    Apr 23, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Teresa

    T rue friend E legant and beautiful R andom but still makes sense E ntertaining, makes me laugh S till my little girly A lways.

    Apr 23, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: They told me to

    This story has been taken off YWS by author.

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Purple

    Uh..... Um..... by doing what you say, my poem is pretty much gone. I wrote it the way I did for a reason, yeah, every line means something to me. ...

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Our Last Kiss

    Oh my. I think you just put my exact feelings into a poem about my breakup.

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The things I do for Love

    She needs to be changed to she's in many sentences. Not very proper english. I myself wasn't a fan. I'm sorry.

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Illusion

    Good connection for many teens! I know I'm guilty of taking my anger out on my pillow, muffling my crys. Bravo!

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: [currently untitled]

    Waz that posed to be about the movie I Am Legand? It was good but that sorta ripped off the title, for you, cuz people might read it expecting something ...

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Remembering Exodus

    Bravo! I am, myself, fascinated with the Holocaust. I really liked it.

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Purple

    Well sorry girl. Someone asked me what the title was about so I answered their question. That was sorta uncalled for if you ask me, yeah and I just left ...

    Apr 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Approval

    I think this perfectly illustrates the feelings and thoughts of a depressed and desperate girl. Maybe if you could add more to the end saying how she changed from that ...

    Apr 22, 2008


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