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Re: It's Time.
Lol. When I saw the title "It's time" I thought it was about someone going into labour. Sorry but OMG I feel really stupid. I liked it though. :D.
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: For all the Heathers...
Is this real or not because it is posted under "Other". ?? If it is I'm sorry.
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: First Kiss
Cute! I LOVED it. I have to admit I did think "What the F?" when he started to lick the girls face. Lol. I liked how it was a dream. ...
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 2
Reading this is sort of depressing Jared!
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: Run, Fat Boy, Run! Day 1
Bradford really made you guys do that in health class? That's retarded! That's why Bailey is cool. Peace! -Ailam
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: Teresa
T rue friend E legant and beautiful R andom but still makes sense E ntertaining, makes me laugh S till my little girly A lways.
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: They told me to
This story has been taken off YWS by author.
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Purple
Uh..... Um..... by doing what you say, my poem is pretty much gone. I wrote it the way I did for a reason, yeah, every line means something to me. ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Our Last Kiss
Oh my. I think you just put my exact feelings into a poem about my breakup.
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: The things I do for Love
She needs to be changed to she's in many sentences. Not very proper english. I myself wasn't a fan. I'm sorry.
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Illusion
Good connection for many teens! I know I'm guilty of taking my anger out on my pillow, muffling my crys. Bravo!
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: [currently untitled]
Waz that posed to be about the movie I Am Legand? It was good but that sorta ripped off the title, for you, cuz people might read it expecting something ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Remembering Exodus
Bravo! I am, myself, fascinated with the Holocaust. I really liked it.
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Purple
Well sorry girl. Someone asked me what the title was about so I answered their question. That was sorta uncalled for if you ask me, yeah and I just left ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Approval
I think this perfectly illustrates the feelings and thoughts of a depressed and desperate girl. Maybe if you could add more to the end saying how she changed from that ...
Apr 22, 2008
